sábado, 3 de diciembre de 2016

An opinion essay

It is well-know, that divorce occurs in many homes and many people think that it is a problem.

Studies show that 2 of 100 people are divorced. In my opinion the first cause of divorces are disscussions. As result of this, the couples en up with the divorce.

It seems to me that other cause of divorce is the fights of the couple, that can end with agressions.

In general, I think that divorce is a good idea in some situations, for example, if you are suffering from agressions; and bad in other situations, for example, if you have kids.

1 comentario:

  1. It's a bit short.

    Be careful with:

    "disscussions" = "discussions" (l.3)

    "en" = "end" (l.3)

    "other cause" = "another cause" (l.4)

    Grade: 7,5

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